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Friday, June 24, 2016

kfc is awesome

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  1. Hi Dani. i love your amagnation from making. the KFC slide that you have made. i think you got some help it is amazing.

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  3. love it its so cool keep the good work up

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  4. Hi Dani i like your stik and how he got in hes car.
    Then he went to kfc.
    after he went to peza.But did he time cravall.
    I don't get it.
    From Blake.

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  5. Comments from the Junior Hub
    I really like that video because I like how the picture was moving - Lucy
    How did you get the picture to move? Because I thought it was really cool how it was moving - Daisy
    I like the movie. Did it take very long to make? Do you like what you made? - Hannes
    50 pages that's a lot! I like the movie maybe next time you could add even more detail - Fenix

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    1. Thanks guys i'll make shore next time.

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  6. Mr C likes it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  7. Kamusta Dani,
    This is a really good slideshow, because you made the pictures move. You could be the next Walt Disney. I can see how Mr C likes it. It reminds when my brother he did an animation on paper then he flipped it, then the pictures moved. Where did you get the idea? Also please check on your spelling.

    Blog you later
    From Joseph C (Hay Park School)

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    1. thanks it was my first ever animation.

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  8. Talofa Lava, my name is Travis from Room 9 Waikowhai Primary School.

    My family and I go to KFC sometimes and I really love to eat Wicked wings. What is your favourite food at KFC? In that slideshow after KFC the stickman went to Pizza Hut. So what is your favourite type of pizza? Mine is Hawaiian. Where did you get the images from? Overall I really like your animation. It is an awesome piece of artwork. It would be really awesome if you comment on my blog,http://wpstravisn.blogspot.co.nz/.

    Fa sefo and God Bless

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    1. my favorite thing at kfc in the wicked wings to andI like dominos instead of pizza hut and it is chesse garlic.

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  9. Hi my name is Sadie at Waikowhai primary school.

    I really like the KFC slideshow that you have made about how AWESOME KFC is.
    My favourite food from KFC is the crispy skin of the chicken. KFC is also my favourite take-out. What is your favourite food at KFC? What did you use to make that KFC stop motion slide? Maybe next time you could work on your spelling. LOVE the work that you have been doing lately, I am looking forward to seeing more interesting work during the year.

    PLEASE feel welcome to look at my blog http://wpssadiec.blogspot.co.nz/
    Blog you later
    From Sadie

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  10. Hi Dani, My name is Hilary and I really like Stick figure and the ‘Stop motion’. Have you thought about it making sense because I don’t really get how one minute he enters KFC with a lot of people and then he orders and there’s no people at all except for the man ordering and then driving to pick up your burger order at the ‘PEZA” Place(it’s actually pizza). Have you thought about using the spelling correct tool. Could you make it so that instead of him seeming like he’s stuck, and then zoom ahead in his wagon and going through shapes and going to the beach, making it less complicated to understand? Was that stick figure in the slideshow you? This is a link to my blog, feel free to comment.- http://wpshilaryg.blogspot.co.nz/ This is a link to a stop motion video - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ijwy8XFC4wg Another one - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ECe8_qYSsEU These are to help you with your stop motion. Hope you post more things


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  11. hi dani I am from waikowhai primary school. the kfc slide is very good because you made all the people, THe plane and the car out of shapes. The KFC story is really cool I like KFC as well what is your fav kfc picae? What site did you use to make the slide? there are some spelling errors., you could check.
    If you want to vist my blog at http://wpsjoshuas.blogspot.co.nz/(fell free to commet)
    From Joshua
    Blog you later.

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  12. Kia ora my name is Darlene I am a student from Waikowhai Primary School.
    I really liked your just waiting for your mum so you can get some KFC, and then pizza post
    It was amazing how you created that and how you made that . What kind of shapes did
    You use to do that?
    Please check out my blogspot at http// wpsDarlene@blogspot.co.nz
    Blog you later!!!!!!!
    From Darlene GOD BLESS!!!

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  13. Kia Ora, My name is Max and I am a student in room 8 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how you animated all the body parts on the human ordering at KFC and the Pizza place. It made me think of when I had KFC for dinner one night. Have you thought naming what Pizza place like Pizza hut, Domino's?.If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://maxmublogspot.co.nz.

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  14. Hi my name is Jack I am from waikowhai primary school in room 8,

    This slide looks very cool and the cartoon that you made was very cool too. How did you make it move?Next time could you add more words instead of pictures. How long did it take to make? You must of put a lot of effort into it.

    From Jack.R

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  15. Hi my name is Ofa and i attend Waikowhai Primary School.

    I liked how you explained how you really like KFC and that you showed us each step of how you went to KFC. I would like to know what you like about KFc the most? One thing that you could try and do next time is add descriptive words to add detail to your posts.

    Here is the site to my blog if you would like to come cheak it out http://wpsofat.blogspot.co.nz/

    From Ofa

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  16. WOW the best i mite be your friend if i non who you are

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  17. Hi my name is Grace and I am a student at Owairaka Primary School.

    I love it, it’s so cool keep the good work up, I really like your animation because you went to all these different places. Maybe next time you could reread your work so that the word’s make sense when they are talking. I also really like the things you made with shape’s they are really cool. You should visit my blog- Click here to see it - Do you like any other fast food place like, Mcdonalds, Burger King or anything like that???

    Blog ya later
    Grace

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  18. Hi my name is Nahlah From Owairaka Primary School, I also Love KFC Wow, I am very impressed of what you made, I have to learn to make animations just as good, I love Mcdonalds as well, I have a question for you, Do you have any tips or Ideas for how to make a great animation like yours?

    Please visit my blog and please feel free to comment on it too: http://odsnahlahr.blogspot.co.nz/

    Blog you later! =^..^=

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  19. Hi, Dani my name is Deminika I go to Wesley Intermediate. I like the way you created this animation on a slide it is creative. I am impressed with your animation that you done. There are a bit of mistakes in your slide. You could check your spelling with a buddy before publishing. But nice effort you put into this slide.

    Please feel free to visit my blog http://wisdeminikav.blogspot.com/

    Thank you,
    Deminika

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  20. Kia ora. My name is Lucy and I am student at Owairaka School. I like your animation about KFC. And if you don't know what kfc is it's Kentucky fried chicken. Next time check the spelling in your animation, maybe show it to a friend before your publish it. Tata From Lucy. If you wnat to see my work http://odslucyr.blogspot.co.nz/

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  21. Hi Dani. I'm from Owairaka School, from Room 21 and my name is Tobi :) I like your slide about going to KFC. Its a good go making an animation using Google Slides. Was it your first go? Next time try to do it slowly and do not rush. Maybe buddy check it with your friends before you publish it. From Tobi.

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  22. Kia ora Dani

    My name is Zac and I am from the Owairaka School. I love your KFC animation. Its really nice and I like KFC too. But next time if you add in more slides it won't be as glitchy and maybe get a buddy to check it before you publish it on your blog. They can find any spelling mistakes for you. If you want to visit my blog copy and paste http://odszacn.blogspot.co.nz/ . Kakite and blog ya later

    From Zac :D

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  23. Hi dani your slide show was really cool. Maybe you could put about 15 slides for every different movement so it flows more. Another thing, check your spelling and put detail in your slide show. From Kayla

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  24. Hi Dani.
    We love your animation and the fact that your character went to many different places. It is an exciting slide show with an easy to follow plot. Maybe you could add more speech into it next time and add some background in the slides with the car. Overall it was an amazing slide and we can’t wait to see your next one.

    Megan, Katie and Niamh.

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  25. Love the slides, they are so cool. Keep up the good work. It makes me feel so hungry. Can you think about putting a background on slide 1 to 16.

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  26. Wow! I love your work on your animation Dani. It was a cool idea. This reminds me of how my class is doing animations about The Treaty Of Waitangi. Some of your slides confused me, though, because after you showed your guy go to KFC then to a pizza shop then swimming, it sort of got dragged off the topic. I look forward to see you post more on your blog. Keep up the great work!

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  27. Wow! I love your work on your animation Dani. It was a cool idea. This reminds me of how my class is doing animations about The Treaty Of Waitangi. Some of your slides confused me, though, because after you showed your guy go to KFC then to a pizza shop then swimming, it sort of got dragged off the topic. I look forward to see you post more on your blog. Keep up the great work!

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  28. Wow! I love your work on your animation Dani. It was a cool idea. This reminds me of how my class is doing animations about The Treaty Of Waitangi. Some of your slides confused me, though, because after you showed your guy go to KFC then to a pizza shop then swimming, it sort of got dragged off the topic. I look forward to see you post more on your blog. Keep up the great work!

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  29. Kia ora Dani. I really like your KFC slideshow. Maybe next time you should add more slides so it is less glitchy. And next time you should get a buddy to check your spelling. But it is very creative. Overall it is a very good slide and a very delicious topic. What's your favourite KFC item
    ?

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  30. Love it it is so cool keep up the good work.

    It really made me think of going to kfc

    I think you need to work on your spelling mistakes. For “II like some fries” instead of I like some fries and “can I take your allder” instead of can I take your order. Otherwise it was really good

    I am looking forward to a new one in the future

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  31. Awesome animation Dani I like how you did the car and person maybe next time at the end don’t have a empty slide but the rest of it was awesome what made you think of the theme KFC ?

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  32. Hi Dani you spelled order wrong. Why did you put a plane in? A different car in too? Your animation reminded me of having KFC.

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  33. I likes it! Because of the great animation.Try to check for spelling just next time just so it is correct. The pizza
    bit reminds me of dominoes and pizza hut.

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  34. Hi Dani Noah here just cheacking out your blog. I enjoyed the part when you were holding the flag. Did you know that pizzas are made from wheat and kfc are made with heaps of stuff. To improve you should put capital letters and correct spelling but Ka pai

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  35. Hi Dani I lick the slid. Dani you cod ad a titoll

    Rpliy

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  36. Hi my name is connie and I like the way you made it on your own. It reminds me of KFC. You could have showed us how the pizza got in the car.

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  37. I really like the way that you did another person at the KFC shop. It reminded me of when I went to the pizza and KFC shop. Have you thought about not putting a blank page at the end and spelling pizza right.

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  38. Hi my name is Sandra . I like how you set up your images , and I like how you were putting up your arms it was like you were saying awesome .
    I could not read some of the words you did not spell them right . Could you use a dictionary to spell some of the words? For the slide show why did you put a empty slide at the back ? You could use it and write the end on it , and If you asked for fries why did you not take some with you to the car?

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  39. Hi my name is Chloe. Wow I really like your slideshow when you said some words like “How may I take your order?”
    Try to fix some mistakes that you have done so that it makes sense.I could not read your words because they were not spelt right.

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  40. I like how you have put animation into your post. But maybe put your name in the slide. It made me think about the slide that I did.

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  42. Hi my name is Jacob and I am a student at South Hornby School. I really liked how you created the slideshow it really made me think of KFC. Have you thought about putting a title at the beginning of the slideshow and your name at the end.

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  43. Hi my name is Noah. I like how you made the KFC building out of shapes in your slideshow. Next time you might want to check your spelling. You could also add a title and your name at the beginning of the slideshow.

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  44. Hello its me I love your KFC slide i love KFC do you?

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  45. Hi there, my name is Lily and I am a student in Room 12 at South Hornby School. I really like how you have inserted a picture of KFC. It made me think of people at KFC. Have you thought about inserting a photo of yourself and putting it on the your cartoon person . If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://middlesyndicatelearningcommunity.blogspot.co.nz/

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  46. Hi there, my name is Phoenix and I am a student in Room 12 at South Hornby School. I really liked how you put KFC in your slide because it reminds me of when I had KFC with my family. Have you thought about adding music to the slideshow it would make it more interesting. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is

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  47. Hi there, my name is Ethan and I am a student in Room 10 at South Hornby School. I really like the photo of KFC and the pizza you made in your slide. It made me think of eating KFC and pizza . Have you thought about using speech bubbles when there are people talking? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://middlesyndicatelearningcommunity.blogspot.co.nz/

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  48. maraea
    i Really liked how you put and good and helpful thing you put in.

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  49. Talofa lava my name is Cyrus i come from samoa

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