I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I really like how you have put your creation in it I think it's really awesome. I can tall you have put a lot of time into this peace of art your next step would be to put more writing in your peace of art because you have a lot of pictures and not a lot of writing.
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Hi my name is Luca, I go to Kaniere School. I Like your work.It is great looking at your blog. I would love you to look at my blog next week.
ReplyDeleteHi Dan the man it is Caleb.B and I love your creation because you have put a lot of time into doing it and I wish that I could do it.
ReplyDeleteYour next step is to put more writing on it instead of a lot of pictures.
But it is great!
Hey dani its Summer
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have put your
creation in it I think it's really awesome.
I can tall you have put a lot of time into
this peace of art your next step would be
to put more writing in your peace of art
because you have a lot of pictures and not a
lot of writing.