I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Dani it's Hunter here I like your post because you have described what the bad guy looked like. It reminds me of a book I have it is could shearwood bell. I read it last week. My next step is for you to re-read throw your story twice before you publish it, that's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!!!!
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This is Shikarn you done nice job on your story here.
ReplyDeleteHi Dani it's Hunter here I like your post because you have described what the bad guy looked like. It reminds me of a book I have it is could shearwood bell. I read it last week. My next step is for you to re-read throw your story twice before you publish it, that's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Dani Tyler here.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used words that you wouldn't use all the time.
Next time add some more.