Monday, March 13, 2017

fire on the port hils

1 comment:

  1. Hey Dani Miss M here, I like the way that you used paragraphs for your different ideas. I hope the pets are okay too, I would be so upset if anything happened to mine. I wonder why you wrote this story? What was the purpose and do you think you met it?


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