I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Dani Miss M here, I like the way that you used paragraphs for your different ideas. I hope the pets are okay too, I would be so upset if anything happened to mine. I wonder why you wrote this story? What was the purpose and do you think you met it?
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Hey Dani Miss M here, I like the way that you used paragraphs for your different ideas. I hope the pets are okay too, I would be so upset if anything happened to mine. I wonder why you wrote this story? What was the purpose and do you think you met it?
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