I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Dani. This is really good learning how you fell in Maori. Maybe next time go somewhere that's quiet so that there is not much noise in the background it might help people hear you a bit better, otherwise awesome work keep it up love to hear you say some of them in the playground or to the teachers when they say how are you?
Hi Dani Milan here This was really cool but the screencastify was really hard for me to listen. But the rest of the slide was pretty cool and that I am really impressed of what you have done. Maybe you should do it again and this time you could do it in a more quiet space so we can hear you and that you won't get distracted while you do it, plus you could practise the maori words. Catch you later
This is really cool because you put the maori language and the english language. Maybe you should put an ending. My favorite emoji is the cool emoji. Bye
Hey Dani, I enjoyed the part when you reviewed Matao - Cool. Did you think about adding Ngenge and Aroha? To improve, you could add Ngenge and Aroha. Goodbye!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Dani its Kay-lee I love pie the happy one. Why did you say I am going to show you how do you feel .ad more colors to the 1st slide
ReplyDeleteHi Dani it is Shikarn here. Your slide is fantastic to me. The beast part about your slide was you telling me what the words meant.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Dani. This is really good learning how you fell in Maori. Maybe next time go somewhere that's quiet so that there is not much noise in the background it might help people hear you a bit better, otherwise awesome work keep it up love to hear you say some of them in the playground or to the teachers when they say how are you?
ReplyDeleteHi Dani Milan here
ReplyDeleteThis was really cool but the screencastify was really hard for me to listen. But the rest of the slide was pretty cool and that I am really impressed of what you have done. Maybe you should do it again and this time you could do it in a more quiet space so we can hear you and that you won't get distracted while you do it, plus you could practise the maori words. Catch you later
Hey Dani,
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool because you put the maori language and the english language. Maybe you should put an ending. My favorite emoji is the cool emoji. Bye
Hey Dani,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you reviewed Matao - Cool.
Did you think about adding Ngenge and Aroha?
To improve, you could add Ngenge and Aroha.
Goodbye!