Friday, June 30, 2017


Hi guys today I have been learning to write about a journey. The hardest bit was the writing. I had to really work on starting my sentences in different ways, not using the word then too much! It was fun doing the animation.


it was a sunny day in 2017 Jeffry had silver shoes brown hair and a private jet plane plus
pant’s and a t-shirt.

Let’s begin our story,
So Jeffry was in his plane when it crash then he found a desert. Then he found a cactus.  the
cactus asked him do you want to go home. Jeffry said yes so the cactus  teleported to a house.  He was like I am home yay but it was a lie it was not house. Then he was so mad he never does want to see that catus.

So Jeffry went to get fresh air so he went to a forest. He found a bear that can talk he said you need clothes.Jeffry got hungry so he found a duck and cooked then ate  it . Somehow  a car came out of nowhere and hit Jeffry.  It was the duck’s friend. Then Jeffry was like, were you driving? And the duck said yes you chump! The duck went up to his face and pooed on him.

Jeffry got up and said yuck! Then he  found a desert again so he went to the desert and found a magic dog. The dog helped  Jeffry get home and jeffry said I love that dog.  Jeffry got in his house and the magic dog said can I stay with you.

The moral of the story is that you should never trust a cactus!


  1. hi Dani it looks like you have done a lod of work well done from Milla

  2. Hi Dani,

    This is some really cool work that you have done. It looks like it took a lot of time and effort. You have described your story in the post very well so that we can enjoy it. Can I suggest that next time you check on some spelling errors. Great work! At my school I animated using google slides. Please check that out on my blog. Here is a short url : or you could type in

    Kind Regards,

  3. hey dani this is so cool i enjoyed the part when that guy kept on going poof in front of u did u think about what u are going to do or did u just do it as it comes. how long did this take u?

    blog u later


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