I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Dani,
ReplyDeleteLoved the summary and your reflection about the Camera Angels,Its wonderful how you explained the different types of shots used. You Explained that the work was easy! how?
Something that you could work on or improve is making the reflection more detailed with more information because you told us the main points which is good but, adding more details hooks the reader in and gives them more of a visual of what you are learning about
Kaedun.
Hi Dani
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your DLO about camera angles to your blog, you also got some sensible feedback from your peer Kaedun.
Unfortunately, I am unable to access the Lucidpress you've shared. Can you change the sharing settings or alternately, take some screenshots and add them as images to this post so we can see what you've created!
- Miss Birtch