I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Dani it look's like your animation is good. but you don't need to do animation all the time. but i see you have been working really good. i think you should stop now because you have done real work.
Hi Dani it's Noah here just checking out your blog it's a good post but there is some mistakes did you show this to pam before you published before you publish. Next time you should go throw it and check do you have capital letters and full stops but you did good ka pai! I also like that you put animation in your slide show another ka pai!
You have done a really good job of your animation Dani. I like that you want to show caring for others like you mean it. In your next slide I would like you to use speech bubbles.
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hi Dani,it's me Dion. I think you'r friendliness post is so so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I don't think you need to work on anything.
ReplyDeleteHi Dani it look's like your animation is good. but you don't need to do animation all the time. but i see you have been working really good. i think you should stop now because you have done real work.
ReplyDeleteHi Dani it's Noah here just checking out your blog it's a good post but there is some mistakes did you show this to pam before you published before you publish. Next time you should go throw it and check do you have capital letters and full stops but you did good ka pai! I also like that you put animation in your slide show another ka pai!
ReplyDeleteYou have done a really good job of your animation Dani. I like that you want to show caring for others like you mean it. In your next slide I would like you to use speech bubbles.
ReplyDeleteHi Dani,its Dion just checking out your blog.I do like your post but I think you have too much animation.[on your caring for others post.]
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