I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today I was learning about mars mars has 0.13 percent of oxygen so people can live on mars. But you won't live for awhile but you need to grow veggies and get water. So that's what I learnt about mars.
Kia ora Dani. From reading your introduction, I thought the video would be related to life on Mars but it is actually about tears in space. Maybe next time you could make sure the information you share and the content of the video are related.
Kia ora Dani. This was interesting to see that is stays like that that is so cool for me. Next time you could you say what you know about mars so. So keep it up because it was good information.
Sawubona Dani This blog post was weird but epic could you please add more information about mars? Also I'd like to know where you found the information!
Hello Dani it is Elijescha here. what did you think what will happen? Mady next you can add more writing? you could write about what you did think? bye bye bye.
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Hey Dani, Really interesting fact about oxygen there. I wonder if people will end up living on Mars? What do you think?
ReplyDeleteHi Dani that is really interesting next time you should put more longer videos like that and you could learn something right?
ReplyDeletesee you later.
Kia ora Dani.
ReplyDeleteFrom reading your introduction, I thought the video would be related to life on Mars but it is actually about tears in space. Maybe next time you could make sure the information you share and the content of the video are related.
nice space video we want more
ReplyDeleteKia ora Dani.
ReplyDeleteThis was interesting to see that is stays like that that is so cool for me.
Next time you could you say what you know about mars so.
So keep it up because it was good information.
Sawubona Dani
ReplyDeleteThis blog post was weird but epic could you please add more information about mars? Also I'd like to know where you found the information!
thats cool i dident know that thats so cool
ReplyDeletekia ora Dani!
ReplyDeleteThats amazing!
That reminds me of when I watched Chris Hadfield it was amazing!
Well that's,me Emalea
Hello Dani it is Elijescha here.
ReplyDeletewhat did you think what will happen?
Mady next you can add more writing?
you could write about what you did think?
bye bye bye.
Fakalofa Lahi atu Dani Safiyya here.
ReplyDeleteThis video is quite funny!
Was Mars a subject in reading?
Bye for now.