I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
HI Dani It is Lacie here from tawa class nice job on this animation maybe next time you could add more on to them becasuse it would be more interesting and cooler and you would get heeps more comments.
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hello Dani i really liked the explosions in the plain. this reminded me of star wars. i think you should of made it a little bit shorter.
ReplyDeleteHI Dani It is Lacie here from tawa class nice job on this animation maybe next time you could add more on to them becasuse it would be more interesting and cooler and you would get heeps more comments.
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