I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi guys today we had a assemble and it was cool after that we got our books nothing was hard but this was soo fun we all had fun and see you next time Bye!!!
Bonjour Dani Nice work, you also need to check your spelling. but other than that great job. and next time could you make the slides go slower? Blog you later.
Kia ora Dani Milan here well um there is a lot of thing that are going on in this slide. So when I first read it they were videos but at first I didn't know that it was a video but then I realised there was one so maybe you could give people some heads up for it and then while I was reading the rest you had some spelling mistakes and you kept on repeating the same thing, it seems that you have rushed this and haven't checked it well. So yeah that is pretty much it but here is some positive words that you have done well about telling what had happened catch you later byeee.
Kia ora Dani, Zoey here. I love your slide and all the photos and the background I found awesome but maybe next time you could make sure it makes sense and that you spell people's names right and that you don't say the same thing twice in a row and maybe next time you could use punctuation. Blog U Later!!
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Hi Dani Good work like it bye
ReplyDeleteBonjour Dani
ReplyDeleteNice work, you also need to check your spelling. but other than that great job. and next time could you make the slides go slower?
Blog you later.
Kia ora Dani
ReplyDeleteMilan here well um there is a lot of thing that are going on in this slide. So when I first read it they were videos but at first I didn't know that it was a video but then I realised there was one so maybe you could give people some heads up for it and then while I was reading the rest you had some spelling mistakes and you kept on repeating the same thing, it seems that you have rushed this and haven't checked it well. So yeah that is pretty much it but here is some positive words that you have done well about telling what had happened catch you later byeee.
Kia ora Dani, Zoey here.
ReplyDeleteI love your slide and all the photos and the background I found awesome but maybe next time you could make sure it makes sense and that you spell people's names right and that you don't say the same thing twice in a row and maybe next time you could use punctuation.
Blog U Later!!
Hi Dani TJ here I like how Scott Tolluch makes them funny books and when he makes that funny voice and yea. But it was good bye now.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Dani, Aryan here checking out your blog!
ReplyDeleteScott Tolluch looks very cool and I wish I was there but I was sick on that day.