I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I like how you have set out your slide but remember to put a capital I for your sentence next time. Next time can you do more writing on all of your slides. Keep it up blog ya later.
Hi Dani it's me Elham. Wow you have written a lot and I really like the goals that you have made especially in math. I am sorry I didn't get what you've meant in our sharing space slide. Blog u later!
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Kia ora Dani
ReplyDeleteJust make sure you use all of the space that is provided on the slide so we can see a few examples of your wotk.
Kia ora dani
ReplyDeleteNice job
I can see that you have a very clear idea on what to write.
I bet your confrence went amazingly well.
Like Miss Waho said maybe use more of the space on the slide as it is a bit bunched up.
What is your favorite slide?
Is it your goals or writing?
Blog you later
Hey Dani!
ReplyDeleteSo I see this from term three near the end of the term.
So I wonder if you did well?
I love your slide.
Kia ora Dani
ReplyDeleteI like how you have set out your slide but remember to put a capital I for your sentence next time. Next time can you do more writing on all of your slides. Keep it up blog ya later.
Kia Ora Dani
ReplyDeleteI like the goal you set for yourself but in tec and maths I think you need to put more in .
Bye
Hi Dani it is Bailey here i liked your student conference slide good job and keep it up blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHi Dani it's me Elham.
ReplyDeleteWow you have written a lot and I really like the goals that you have made especially in math.
I am sorry I didn't get what you've meant in our sharing space slide.
Blog u later!