I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi bloggers today I made a slide about bully's. So I'm going to ex plain whats easy and hard. So the easy bit was explain about bully's the hard bit was what to do it about so that's all hope you like my slide and bye
Kia Ora Dani, my name is Tayla I am a year 6 student in Te Ngahere at Paihia school. I really like your blog post about bullies are not allowed. You made a great animation about bullies. I liked the way how you added an explanation about bullying and then added an animation Keep up the great work. Sincerely Tayla Here is a link to my blog.
Kia ora Dani, My name is Kingi I am a year seven in Te Ngahere from Paihia School. I like your presentation about bullies. It is cool that you are making slides about it. The part I like is when he is in his mind with the Genie. Keep up the good work.
Kia ora, Dani Milla here from Gilberthorpe School, I liked the way you did everything yourself it must have been very hard, Next time maybe make a more intersting story about being bulled, How did you think about the paper it was awsome, I have a question how long did this slide take for you ? my guess is 2 hours ? (: Anyways goodday.
Kia Ora Dani, I admire when you added the part when the person was in his own head. Another part I loved was when the person called the teacher and said "He called me a loser!" and then the teacher talked to the bully. When I read your post I learnt that you don't have to be shy to tell the teacher about something that you don't want happening to you. Maybe you could add some other moving objects in the background so that it could be more realistic too like other people and cars.
Kia ora,I'm Ethan from Te Rōpū Manawaroa I enjoyed the part when you went into the class and told the teacher on the bully so the bully got in trouble.You brought me back to when Kareem and I mad a slide like between 500 to 1000 slides long if you don't believe me I would send it to you but I won't do that because you should believe me.But your slide is really good so bye!
Hi Dani. Kaunteya here. I like this animation because it's about not bullying others and to stand up to bullys.I like that. Nice job.Oh also when are you gonna bring out part two? because i'm enjoying it. Bye!
Kia Ora Dani Chelsea here I was looking on your blog and I saw this! I like how you have put to be continued! Also how you have put it so that people want to keep reading! Next time can you make the bag green because when the boy got the bag it was green? Keep it up blog ya latter!
Hi Dani Safiyya here, I love that you did a no bullies allowed slide I loved watching it! For when you make the continued version of the slide can you add a link? Bye for now.
Hi Dani it is Addison here and i think i might of had to watch it in a dark room it was really good. I want to watch it over and over again it is just so amazing and riley was watching it with me Bye.
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Kia Ora Dani, my name is Tayla I am a year 6 student in Te Ngahere at Paihia school. I really like your blog post about bullies are not allowed. You made a great animation about bullies. I liked the way how you added an explanation about bullying and then added an animation
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work.
Sincerely
Tayla
Here is a link to my blog.
Kia ora Dani,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kingi I am a year seven in Te Ngahere from Paihia School. I like your presentation about bullies. It is cool that you are making slides about it. The part I like is when he is in his mind with the Genie. Keep up the good work.
Kia ora, Dani Milla here from Gilberthorpe School, I liked the way you did everything yourself it must have been very hard, Next time maybe make a more intersting story about being bulled, How did you think about the paper it was awsome, I have a question how long did this slide take for you ? my guess is 2 hours ? (: Anyways goodday.
ReplyDeletethis is Amazing! because.. when l really your post l learnt if you could
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Dani,
ReplyDeleteI admire when you added the part when the person was in his own head. Another part I loved was when the person called the teacher and said "He called me a loser!" and then the teacher talked to the bully. When I read your post I learnt that you don't have to be shy to tell the teacher about something that you don't want happening to you. Maybe you could add some other moving objects in the background so that it could be more realistic too like other people and cars.
hey Dani its Acasia I agree bullieys are not aloud I like this because it is right.
ReplyDeleteKia ora,I'm Ethan from Te Rōpū Manawaroa
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you went into the class and told the teacher on the bully so the bully got in trouble.You brought me back to when Kareem and I mad a slide like between 500 to 1000 slides long if you don't believe me I would send it to you but I won't do that because you should believe me.But your slide is really good so bye!
Kia ora Shikarn here. This is a awesome animation and I agree bullies should not be aloud at school or anywhere else.
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Hi Dani. Kaunteya here. I like this animation because it's about not bullying others and to stand up to bullys.I like that. Nice job.Oh also when are you gonna bring out part two? because i'm enjoying it. Bye!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Dani Chelsea here
ReplyDeleteI was looking on your blog and I saw this! I like how you have put to be continued! Also how you have put it so that people want to keep reading! Next time can you make the bag green because when the boy got the bag it was green? Keep it up blog ya latter!
Hi Dani Safiyya here,
ReplyDeleteI love that you did a no bullies allowed slide I loved watching it!
For when you make the continued version of the slide can you add a link?
Bye for now.
Hi Dani it is Addison here and i think i might of had to watch it in a dark room it was really good. I want to watch it over and over again it is just so amazing and riley was watching it with me Bye.
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