It has 5 to 6 at the top 7 in the middle 5 to 6 at the bottom it has got to have lots of detail about nature.Why? Because it is a Japaneses tradition people in japan do this a lot and their are some good ones
I have done this video about haiku's
and I hope you enjoy this post good bye.
Hello Dani, I really liked this haiku poem that you've made about blossom trees I enjoyed reading it but next time you should double check if you had right amount of syllables in each sentence, also maybe you could use screencastify in a much quieter place so people can hear your voice. Was it hard making it? From Miguel
ReplyDeleteHi Dani, I enjoyed you reading of your Haiku about blossoms, especially the image of birds as "still as stone" and the reference to magic in relation to the appearance of blossoms. Very thoughtful. I agree with Miguel that their was some background noise to eliminate next time. Keep up your blogging, good work.
ReplyDeleteImpressive effort Dani. A creative and interesting approach. Well done.
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