I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Dani Milan here This post is really good!! You've got your capitals of the place and other thing. You've really done well with the slide and your work I hope I see more of these awesome slide. Catch you later bye.
Hi Dani. It's me Elham. Great job.You used puntion everywhere and I think that this is really great. can you please change the first background because yo can't read the word.
Hey Dani Izzy from Rimu here. I really like this post. Everything seems awesome. Next time you could put a little more info in the slide. Anyway blog ya later.
Hi Dani its Blake from rata class your slide was cool. But I think you should of put some more words on your slide. Next time you should pot les photos and more words buy buy.
Hey Dani, Hannah here! I love this cool stuff, I can't wait for this to be finished! What do you like more the fairy garden or the dream project? Blog ya later!
Hey Dani, Amelia here! This is so cool especially the name Jurrasic World! I can't wait for it to be built. Is the dream project fairy gardens? Were did you get the idea of Jurrasic World? Were are you building it at? Are you the ones at the bricks? Blog ya later!
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ReplyDeleteHi Dani it's Mikayla Here.
ReplyDeletehow do you do the pictures like that?
can you tell me how.
from Mikayla.
Hi Dani Milan here
ReplyDeleteThis post is really good!! You've got your capitals of the place and other thing. You've really done well with the slide and your work I hope I see more of these awesome slide. Catch you later bye.
Hi Dani Caleb here I can't wait tpo see the bilding
ReplyDeleteI wont be here so I wont be able to see the inside!
BYE
Hi Dani. It's me Elham.
ReplyDeleteGreat job.You used puntion everywhere and I think that this is really great.
can you please change the first background because yo can't read the word.
Hey Dani Izzy from Rimu here.
ReplyDeleteI really like this post. Everything seems awesome.
Next time you could put a little more info in the slide.
Anyway blog ya later.
Hi Dani its Blake from rata class your slide was cool.
ReplyDeleteBut I think you should of put some more words on your slide. Next time you should pot les photos and more words buy buy.
Hey Dani, Hannah here!
ReplyDeleteI love this cool stuff, I can't wait for this to be finished!
What do you like more the fairy garden or the dream project?
Blog ya later!
Hey Dani, Amelia here!
ReplyDeleteThis is so cool especially the name Jurrasic World! I can't wait for it to be built.
Is the dream project fairy gardens? Were did you get the idea of Jurrasic World? Were are you building it at? Are you the ones at the bricks?
Blog ya later!